Sunday, May 17, 2009

Dear Friend Comments

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You had travelled so far, but I couldn’t wait,
to share doubts, in my last conscious hour.
Such grief is my gift to the man that I love
I am certain to weep within every shower.
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Ann Beard
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Laurie Hill 24 May 2009

So very beautiful in its sadness. Your words capture emotions and fill the reader with your visions. The images you create haunt the mind and the sadness touches the soul. The memories of harlequin shoes, the youth.....so beautiful 10++++++++++++++ and thankyou

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Kesav Easwaran 24 May 2009

Moving poem Ann...wrtten in wonderful words...brings out fully the grief and pain inside...10

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This moved me too Ann. The images are etched with sadness and suffering. I found the last stanza particularly beautiful... 10 Karin Anderson

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Andrew Blakemore 20 May 2009

Wonderful poetry Ann, a deeply moving pice of work and a pleasure to read. Best wishes, Andrew

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Alison Cassidy 18 May 2009

A beautiful elegy from beyond the grave - your words tread delicately upon the memories of love and loss. Your 'messenger' medium is a very original (and successful) way of telling your sad story. An eloquent and moving write. Love, Allie

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Barbara Terry 17 May 2009

Beautiful. The connection between love and pain is a very thin line. A 10+++++ and thank you for sharing. Love & Hugs, Barbara

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