I'm sorry if i hurt you
That wasnt my intention
I look into your dreamy eyes
seeking tru redemption
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Very moving poem and also very truthful. A true friend is a cherished thing. Friends are precious, I hope that many will get something from the poem. Good job!
I like your poem. Its sincere and it breathes. Im going to keep something that I got from this piece. A. P.S. My name is Anthony.
loved the poem. it is true. true friends do stay together til the end no matter what.
I agree with Jack and Anthony, you're very good. I wish in a weird way I could relate, You see I have never had many friends, and the little amount I did have I wasn't close to. But anyways I love it. :)