Sunday, October 4, 2020

Dear Flower On The Concrete, Comments

Rating: 4.8

Dear flower,
You werent wrong when you decided to grow on this concrete,
Your destiny wasnt wrong when it wrote your home to be here.
Your existence may tell to many wanderers in this city
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Unwritten Soul
COMMENTS
Muhammad Ali 07 December 2020

Hi Soul. Yes almost as always, Your poem brings positivity and creates a soothing layer of freshness around... around the living ones on concrete but for those who can read.

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Unwritten Soul 27 December 2020

Warm words comfy winter-y smile, shukriya

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Yiyan Han 16 October 2020

Yes everyone should believe who they are. Encouraging to read.

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Unwritten Soul 27 December 2020

Your word is such encouraging too... Thanks Yiyan! ! ! : )

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Mj Lemon 06 October 2020

Terrific, Soul...I am reminded that we all have a time, a place, and perhaps a purpose. Those elements may seem strange or difficult for some, but sometimes the stark contrasts remind of the real beauty to the reality. A great verse, Soul!

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Hans Vr 05 October 2020

Wonderful poem, my friend. A superb message.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 05 October 2020

Dear flower, a beautiful inspiring poem.

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Unwritten Soul 27 December 2020

Dear Akham, beautiful short words... thank u

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Lyn Paul 05 October 2020

Dear Soul How we all need to stop and appreciate each flower and the life that we have. The simplicities of life never let us down. Beautiful words.

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Susan Williams 04 October 2020

We forget to be grateful- - - - - yes, we do. It is amazing how often we forget how fortunate we are- there are people as valuable as us who live on the city's concrete street having fallen through the cracks of life. I may be that the souls of these people may be as beautiful as that golden flower in that picture. Well done. Top marks

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M Asim Nehal 04 October 2020

Your poem reminded me the first hand experience I had watching it grow where I could barely imagine. A thoughtful poem after a long gap. Loved it my dear unwritten Soul.100****

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M Asim Nehal 04 October 2020

Wow so well thought, Last year while I was waiting with my wife at one clinic for our turn, I was looking at one of the busiest street down from the second floor, the building was opposite to the Income Tax building and I saw a tiny banyan tree with two branches of 1 and two feet growing between the concrete balcony. I was wondering from where it takes water though getting enough sunlight and how the roots must be feeling. cont..

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Deluke Muwanigwa 04 October 2020

I get it. Nice ode to a solitary flower. Nature abhors a vacuum.This is why out there in outer space there is a person like writing a poem about a flower. Quantum entanglement.

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Ace Of Black Hearts 04 October 2020

Beautifully well written poem, I'm sometimes am amazed how stubborn life is and how it will flourish where it shouldn't. So cheers to the stubborn flower you have captured we need more of them.

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