Wednesday, July 16, 2008

Dear Father, Comments

Rating: 4.7

you hurt me bad,
you hurt me sad,
you don't even know, how much you had,
a loving family, in which you broke,
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Daisy Quevedo
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Greenwolfe 1962 18 August 2008

While this poem is far from perfect, there is more than enough here to recommend it for reading. The Communication and the meaning are both crystal clear. The sentiment cuts very deep with the kind of emotion people like to read. There is very little creativity included here but that is never necessary for a recommendation. GW62

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Kacie Dearly <3 21 July 2008

you know my dad pretty well huh? its a shame.

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Rema Prasanna 16 July 2008

heartfelt write to a dear father... beautifully penned Rema

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