Wednesday, September 26, 2012

Dear Enemy Comments

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It's a shame to my foolish heart
I tried to stop but couldn't i
And now so desparate
It has to thirst
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Sunny Rose
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Unwritten Soul 10 February 2013

The title made me read this and truly you did a great job here..keep it up for new write and polish what you have and be sunnier rose haha_Soul

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 09 October 2012

A gr8 metaphorical poem! Hope u read mine too.

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Aung Si 02 October 2012

I feel something deeply when I read this.But I can't express with words.Really sorrowful poem.The last two lines of first stanza are straight to my heart.I pay respect to u.Cheers......

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Eindaray Kyaw 27 September 2012

Keep on breathing and let you not perish from my eyes....I enjoy this verse We won't call u gay :) don't worry :) Great job! !

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