Dear Diary Comments

A fine start with a nice poem, Brooke. You may like to read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

I enjoyed reading this poem. Good Lyric poem. Love the way you showed how the female mind often thinks. Brilliant.

I liked that peom, It spoke the truth that is how guys get what they want

i liked the way you wrote this poem. & how you expressed your feelings in a way that the reader could relate to them.

i liked the way you rhyme, i like rhyming too. Also your poem had a sad ending which for me completed it. Good work.