Dear Death Comments

Just say no! Tell him you haven't got the time or that you need more time(lots of it) to think about it. Tell him...you're writing a poem...and you know how these things go... love Donall

Passionate, original, and darkly beautiful. May you travel many more poetic miles. Take care. Warmest regards, Sandra

Rachael, a very rich statement here. I loved the attitude of this poem. I'm glad you refused. Thanks for sharing this. David

Shine-on sweetheart shine-on, all the very best now and in the days to come Love duncan X

Great ending, Rachael... I love the attitude! Well done! ! Brian

beautiful worded rachael, how delicately you handle life... well done sweetie! andie d x

This is a very affirmative composition - partly because it takes the grim reaper on fair and square. But wisely, it's not antagonistic. He/she is not the kind of guy to fall out with I suppose. Very good poem with interesting and effective internal rhymes. Excellent work. xx jim

For such a depressing title this is quite an uplifting poem! No mean feat but pulled it off here Rachael.... well done. Impressive write. HG: -) xx

A very interesting poem