Tuesday, November 4, 2008

....Dear Dear Father.... Comments

Rating: 3.3

i hold your hand
and am three again
skipping along,
matching little paws
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Sarwar Chowdhury 12 November 2008

Ammmmazing! sacred love touched! beautifully penned! ....10+

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i shall forever have too my childhood dangling from the end of your palm held there forever by the sheer force of your will against time and age just awesome 21-gun salute for this marvellous piece

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Sathyanarayana M V S 05 November 2008

Outstanding poetry. I read about u in Rehan Hyder's page. U are truely too good.........10

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Reshma Ramesh 05 November 2008

wow..wardha....one more lovely bit of writing....

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Mamta Agarwal 04 November 2008

lovely, great sentiments, memories of a doting daughter. yes, we feel orphaned when we lose our parents.10 thanks Wardha. Mamta

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