Wednesday, April 26, 2017

Dear Daddy Comments

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Daddy said I'm a pretty girl,
The cutiest baby without no doubts;
And that he'll never have me round about.
Showering me with gifts,
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Roshana Phillips
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Roshana Phillips 18 December 2019

Thank you

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Chinedu Dike 18 December 2019

A heart-rending story of child abuse told in persuasive expressions with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing. Roshana.

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It seems the poem is telling the woes of young little daughters ill treated by their fathers.Well written.

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Roshana Phillips 19 December 2019

Thanks for the comment

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Bharati Nayak 02 May 2017

Dear Daddy- -the very title of the poem suggests that you still feel your father as a dear person and his present behavior is unbecoming of his nature.There was a time when you were his pet child and due to some reason he has changed .You have become target of his arrogance.The deep sorrow and sadness is evident in your poem. Life's path is always full of ups and downs.It is never smooth.We have to face it courageously.You have so much talents.Prove yourself so worthy that your Daddy will feel proud to have a daughter like you. Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful poem.

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Roshana Phillips 02 May 2017

Thank you Bharati Nayak

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Jazib Kamalvi 26 April 2017

A touching verse paragraph. Thanks

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Roshana Phillips 27 April 2017

Thank You Jazib Kamalvi

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Roshana Phillips

Roshana Phillips

Guyana, Georgetown
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