Wednesday, March 11, 2009

Dear 'Dad' Comments

Rating: 5.0

Couldn't you see what you were doing
All the pain you were causing
Not just for her but for all of us
How many times did we cry ourselves to sleep
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Ashley Stone
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I love the ending! Great write!

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Linda Weischedel 31 May 2009

Amazing write, you drew me right in. I give you a 10.

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Greenwolfe 1962 26 March 2009

You almost hate to use the term 'Dear Dad.' I know I can't. Not in talking about this. This is really a letter of sorts. I wish this kind of thing were not so common, but I have read a ton of these. I believe some people are walking disasters. This is a story of one of them. No fun reading this. GW62

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