Monday, December 15, 2008

Dear Dad Comments

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AT NIGHT WHEN I LOOK AT THE MOON,
I KNOW YOU LOOK AT IT TO
THEN I WISH I COULD SEE YOU SOON.
WE ARE VERY FAR APART
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LUZAAN de Bruyn
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*Trusting You* 19 December 2008

this is really touching I have a step dad and he has taken care of me for most of my life. this is good. you put your heart into it and sometimes that is the best poetry. Becca

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C. P. Sharma 19 December 2008

You outpour your heart and that becomes your poem as this one. Lovely, keep it up. Technicalities can be taken care of later. Keep it up. CP

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Annie Girl 18 December 2008

this is a wonderful poem its so i dont know i have no words keep up the good work

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Lynda Robson 17 December 2008

A heartfelt write Luzaan, it shows a longing to know your roots,10 Lynda

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 15 December 2008

a very touching poem Luzaan , it shows your kind heart *10*

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