Tuesday, February 26, 2008

* Dear Courage... Comments

Rating: 3.1

What am I to do
when even eternally
I'm shivering from fright,
instead of from the wind?
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Shelley L Baxter
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Kesav Easwaran 12 September 2008

an artful write...shivering mind akin to shivering flames...wind augmenting the word 'shimmer' there...good work, Shelley...my ten for this

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 04 March 2008

i really admired your courage...

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Dr.subhendu Kar 28 February 2008

courage when endeared, fright seems to shiver by the wind closeness happens to blaze by the flames even in deep darkness as even if shadowed as sadness seems to respires as when alone even if lonely i do never exit the passge as when endeared, most commanding yet luscious,10/10 as i promised by the talents......well penned, thanks for sharing

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James B. Earley 27 February 2008

This is not poem's end my friend. There's lots more yet to be written. Best wishes!

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Shelley L Baxter

Shelley L Baxter

Calgary, Canada.
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