Tuesday, January 8, 2008

Dear Brother Comments

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dear brother
will i ever see you again?
or have i lost another friend?
i know you had to go
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Greenwolfe 1962 06 September 2008

There are lines repeated here that there is no need for. The writer dorsn't have a lot to say which is why she did it. It might have been nice if she had sinply said, I love you. Maybe she will, next time. GW62

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Kiki cupcake 14 February 2008

thats beautiful..luv the last line especially i was deeply moved..

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