Dear broken heart
I’ll go through your questions
One by one,
For these things as you know,
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Only last night I was thinking about how I feel about Fate. You've described her much nicer than I have. She is a mean old lady indeed! I loved that, and it has cheered me up. Thanks!
What a good idea, to write to your broken heart! It's well organized. I agree the line about fate is a memorable one (though I hope it's not literally true!) The questions and answers work well. And it's nice that you've found some hope. (I see this was written quite awhile back.)
'Fate is a mean old lady that loves to play games'-what a terriffic image!
I like this one. We all express the same things but in such diversity such different combinations. Good work. Amicalement votre, Ronberge
Dear Ivy this is so well written, Verse four especaily, well what can I say, this is brilliant. Love Duncan