Dear Broken Heart Comments

Dear Ivy this is so well written, Verse four especaily, well what can I say, this is brilliant. Love Duncan

Only last night I was thinking about how I feel about Fate. You've described her much nicer than I have. She is a mean old lady indeed! I loved that, and it has cheered me up. Thanks!

What a good idea, to write to your broken heart! It's well organized. I agree the line about fate is a memorable one (though I hope it's not literally true!) The questions and answers work well. And it's nice that you've found some hope. (I see this was written quite awhile back.)

'Fate is a mean old lady that loves to play games'-what a terriffic image!

Ivy, i cannot believe how good you are!

I like this one. We all express the same things but in such diversity such different combinations. Good work. Amicalement votre, Ronberge

i freaking loved this poem...what an ending...BRILLIANT!