Friday, May 6, 2005

Dear Broken Heart Comments

Rating: 4.6

Dear broken heart
I’ll go through your questions
One by one,
For these things as you know,
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Ivy Christou
COMMENTS
Duncan Wyllie 03 February 2006

Dear Ivy this is so well written, Verse four especaily, well what can I say, this is brilliant. Love Duncan

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Indiscreet Episode 11 November 2005

Only last night I was thinking about how I feel about Fate. You've described her much nicer than I have. She is a mean old lady indeed! I loved that, and it has cheered me up. Thanks!

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Max Reif 06 October 2005

What a good idea, to write to your broken heart! It's well organized. I agree the line about fate is a memorable one (though I hope it's not literally true!) The questions and answers work well. And it's nice that you've found some hope. (I see this was written quite awhile back.)

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Velvet Thorn 23 September 2005

'Fate is a mean old lady that loves to play games'-what a terriffic image!

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Lara W.a 29 July 2005

Ivy, i cannot believe how good you are!

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Ronberge . 17 June 2005

I like this one. We all express the same things but in such diversity such different combinations. Good work. Amicalement votre, Ronberge

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Amberlee Carter 06 May 2005

i freaking loved this poem...what an ending...BRILLIANT!

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