Dear All-Traits, Feelings, Events And Elements! Comments

Oh dear death...but for how long I wonder.

Siddartha, such a fantastic write..........................

well penned /// Time look at your offspring (Honesty, Fate, Luck, Dream, Failure, Pessimism, Death....) like me all entrap me in glittering But you better know I'm not your step son why your illusion ravishes me on the pregnancy of optimism? ............

One by one you made it all so interesting good thinking

Dear Poet, your Traits, Feelings, Events And Elements, as well as Emotions will stay with you. Be patient under adversity. Be happy. Keep writing. Come, read and comment some of my poems. There are not too much of them.

It's a piece something I can relate too... Thnx for sharing.... Naila

A mesmerizing dialogue with the self but universally engaged, Indeed, this is no puppet show to get you in awe and wonders! A very decent question comes up on the next scene: Please, teach me how to cry in dignified manners. Who is the stand-up comedian here or the lay-down director? Not to you personally, dear Poet, of course not, but to the society, you are addressing to....Thank you for sharing this socially engaged poem.

A mesmerizing dialogue with the self but universally engaged, Indeed, this is no puppet show to get you in awe and wonders! A very decent question comes up on the next scene: Please, teach me how to cry in dignified manners. Who is the stand-up comedian here or the lay-down director? Not to you personally, dear Poet, of course not, but to the society, you are addressing to....Thank you for sharing this socially engaged poem.A 10 and much much more for this socially engaged poetry.

Greeting, great piece thank you for sharing

As the famous poet rightly said: Our sweetest songs are those that tell us of our saddest thoughts

Well done, Your work pass through the all time to reach the dream, fat and death. Wonderful feelings.

The two lined pattern you create gives us something to look for in the second line when the first one has stated how the state of the world you are talking about has been put forth. I love the depth of the issues. I feel the needs of you as a writer and person who has experiences from the past you are drawing from. I also appreciate that you have a message that sets out to argue why you are insisting on the issues to be the way you would like them to be. A very verbose way to express what I found informative about this lovely poem. One of the best poems I have read. I really loved it for it is about our humanity and the way life throws itself on us.

a man composed of feelings and emotions. words come from real life. and real life can't always reflected by words. sometimes we are fed up of all words. veey nice poem dear

Another beautiful unique jwell

Quest of life! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

a very good work, indeed, thank you for sharing

nice writing even the use of word DEAR also for DEATH it is impressive. good work sir......

i liked the ending to it. Good work

I liked it. It's got a lot of sides to it. I invite you to take a look at my new One call, boy to a man it's a true story.

the poem holds sth special inside. a mistic mood between the lines. the sinceriy makes it simple to feel and true to believe. well done work