Wednesday, October 22, 2008

Dear Comments

Rating: 4.1

If all I had left to give, was one last night before I'd die
I wouldn't ask for much, only for you to hold me...
Oh, love, Wrap your arms around my neck,
Then I had one single dying wish
...
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Kyle Jones
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shy beauty 13 October 2011

who is this poem about... becuz i love it

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Emily Maddison Saffron...x 02 September 2009

that is so romantic... u must really love her...

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I love that it's in first person! You again have great imagery and powerful emotions. I can't say that I know what you're going through because love is different for everyone, but I'm pretty sure that I've been through something like it. Unfortunately I spent more time away from them than with them... Great poem!

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Saane Pahulu 09 August 2009

wow you must be crazy in love with Tyease! ! ! have you read her poems their really great just like yours! ! ! Good luck and everything between you two

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Sarwar Chowdhury 26 July 2009

Ammmmzing! very touchy! finely penned! 10+

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Aarraa Shaun 17 June 2009

it's a nice poem she must mean something great for you

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Aiesha Freela 20 April 2009

oh emm gee! ! ! ! ! tyese is one lucky grl i hope u guys last 4evr =) best wishes, Aiesha Freela

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Nangula Immanuel 13 April 2009

aaah! that is so sweet.Tyease is one licky girl!

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Angel (Pepper lyons) 28 October 2008

Very Good. Keep Your Chin Up Boy.. You Did Good, And Your Gal Knows You Love Her! Good Job ~Angel

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Tyease Collins 22 October 2008

eeek! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! perfect title. I love you honey! ! ! ! ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ Tyeasea

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Kyle Jones

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Tegucigalpa: Honduras: Carribean
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