If all I had left to give, was one last night before I'd die
I wouldn't ask for much, only for you to hold me...
Oh, love, Wrap your arms around my neck,
Then I had one single dying wish
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that is so romantic... u must really love her...
I love that it's in first person! You again have great imagery and powerful emotions. I can't say that I know what you're going through because love is different for everyone, but I'm pretty sure that I've been through something like it. Unfortunately I spent more time away from them than with them... Great poem!
wow you must be crazy in love with Tyease! ! ! have you read her poems their really great just like yours! ! ! Good luck and everything between you two
oh emm gee! ! ! ! ! tyese is one lucky grl i hope u guys last 4evr =) best wishes, Aiesha Freela
Very Good. Keep Your Chin Up Boy.. You Did Good, And Your Gal Knows You Love Her! Good Job ~Angel
eeek! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! perfect title. I love you honey! ! ! ! ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ Tyeasea
who is this poem about... becuz i love it