I think the broken style works very well It makes the poem very unusual and immediate and coveys a sence of fractiousness I would personally keep it as it is
jim
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I think the broken style works very well It makes the poem very unusual and immediate and coveys a sence of fractiousness I would personally keep it as it is jim