Wednesday, February 11, 2009

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A male Hairdresser,
a cliche, but he is, well, gay,
as he will freely say.
A teenage apprentice,
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Michele Hegarty
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James Roberts 13 February 2009

I think the broken style works very well It makes the poem very unusual and immediate and coveys a sence of fractiousness I would personally keep it as it is jim

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