The pain that people feel,
is the rough past coming out.
You just have to embrace and deal,
so in peace may lay your doubts.
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A well-worked out analysis of the pain in life and life's confusion. A youthful wisdom that is evident in these lines.
Paining experiences are part of the life game...'just embrace and deal' them as you said very well, Kathryn...and 'the ones we love make the difference' and look forward to them when you are in pain...motivating and educative...written beautiful...10
This is a great poem very descriptive on the emtions one feels when dealing with pain, keep writing 10 +. My regards Joey
quite amazing write that bristles the wisdom, yet with imasgery, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing
Sometimes our past's bad experiences mess up our present times. We really should know how to deal with our pain. I like its lesson. Keep on writing more and more. I can see you have the potential to become a great poet.
You write from the heart and with purity... That is required for a good poet the rest comes with experience... Keep writing... Sincerely, Kamran
nice poem............ i like it............... Athena *** words will change the world ***
I love this poem for its insightful words of wisdom.