Friday, October 25, 2024

Deaf To The World Comments

Rating: 5.0

My life is a stream of consciousness, wherein I drown in a sea of imagery.
I am a camera that flows over the world without sense or censorship.
No sound acts as a full stop on my endeavours.
I am not disturbed by noise or distracted by voices.
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Tony Sandy
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Bri Edwards 25 October 2024

***** and to my 'Favorites', though I don't think Favorites are saved anywhere. ;)))

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Bri Edwards 25 October 2024

AND PH/P-H/PoemHunter will also cause a comment to DISAPPEAR if it contains too many 'characters' aka letters or numerals or maybe even punctuation marks! ! PH's limit may be 300 characters.

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Bri Edwards 25 October 2024

'New Poets' here: Careful! ! ! PH does not (clearly) warn that certain words and symbols used in a comment will causes PH to erase the comments before it can be seen by others. DON'T dare use a 'dollar sign'! ! ! I usually COPY my comment before hitting 'Submit'.

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Bri Edwards 25 October 2024

Without the Poet's Notes, this poem's meaning might elude some (many?) readers. Did I say 'Welcome to PoemHunter'?

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Bri Edwards 25 October 2024

Though I find the following line at least EXAGGERATED in its factuality (ok, I made up that word) , I DO LIKE THE LINE: '

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Bri Edwards 25 October 2024

Great apes and monkeys are both primates, but there are several ways to tell them apart: Tails: Apes do not have tails, but monkeys do. Apes have tailbones as a remnant of their lost tails. Size: Great apes are generally larger than monkeys.

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Bri Edwards 25 October 2024

Re your use of 'dumb', I usually think of 'dumb' as meaning 'stupid' or 'ignorant' though 'dumb' also means 'deaf'.

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Bri Edwards 25 October 2024

I blame part of my not-so-great hearing on 'narrow ear canals'; I have my wife dredge them every few months.

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Bri Edwards 25 October 2024

Thanks for the Poet's Notes. I like (esp.) : 'sense or censorship'. I think I'd opt to give up the realms of sound IF I could keep 'the realms of vision'.

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