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With every step
my strides are weakened,
my heart is weighed down 'cus
my folks' burden causes it aches.
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Benson Don
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Jazib Kamalvi 30 October 2017

A great symbolic write describing the decay in society. Many thanks, Benson, You may like to read my Ars Poetica named, Poetic Sense-1.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 October 2017

Such an interesting poem, Benson....

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