Saturday, August 2, 2008

Deadly Serious Comments

Rating: 5.0

A thin and thready threnody
played by the winds on the phone wires.
An eerie haunting melody
regretting unfulfilled desires.
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ivor or ivor.e hogg
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Fay Slimm 23 August 2008

This condition of clutching misery to oneself until it berefts you of even aquaintances, is so prevalent today, this needed saying loud and clear as you have done Ivor. Beautifully rhymed too. Greetings from Fay Slimm.

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Thad Wilk 02 August 2008

Ahh sad but true, people do Wallow in their misery They make others blue They bring (them down too) With this constant - negativity! ! *10*! ! Good One Ivor! Friend Thad

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Rema Prasanna 02 August 2008

this is an eye openor to me.. I close my eyes and ears for all those unpleasant...let it come and attack from all around... wise not to react.. thank you for this prayer.

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