Tuesday, August 26, 2008

Deadly Kiss Comments

Rating: 3.9

Disappointed, hurt, disowned
With catastrophic consequence
A child in mid development
Alone, devoured by family severance
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Bob Gibson 07 May 2009

I know i need to read this poem ten times to reach its full affect but you have left me breathless on the first reading! so much to say but, i pray for the intelligence to say it! regards bob

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Kesav Easwaran 05 September 2008

good write, Wendy...the third stanza lines are really impressive, hurting though...10

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