Deadly Friends Comments

Amazing poem, dear Luz, you were and are a very blessed person, I have learned a lot about this old fashioned curement. Thank you for sharing 5 Stars full

This poem iis really scared me Even more so at the climax. It kept me on my toes. Bravo! Luz give me a shout I haven't heard from you in weeks

For in my hand I played with this new friend, He would break apart and magically retract. Granny said to swallow him down my throat To help my belly-ache, or so she thought. sugar and mercury. a very fine poem. tony

Oh! Nice unexpected ending. interesting poem Luz.. All that shines are not gold. Nor all that tastes sweet are sugar either. Liked a lot 10/10

allegorical touching in- my best friend's names were Sugar and Mercury. //

deadly friends robbed the health but still the best friendship bridge existed with Sugar and Mercury// interesting

Something having a silver color and sweet taste that was given to a child to swallow by her granny? It.has a faint unusual taste and it helped to recover from belly-ache. Many such things were given to the grandchildren in various diseases by the grandparents that helped them a lot. Now modern medication has taken their place and we have forgotten those friendly house made medicines. A nice recollection of grandparents' care for their grandchildren.

My deadly friends robbed me of my health, Some even say that I'm lucky to be alive For you see, my best friend's names were Sugar and Mercury.... very beautiful

This is a beautiful poem on deadly friend having touching expression. I want to quote some impressive line here.... My deadly friends robbed me of my health, Some even say that I'm lucky to be alive For you see, my best friend's names were Sugar and Mercury. Thanks for sharing.

For in my hand I played with this new friend, He would break apart and magically retract.......sugar and mercury...... experiences of life, deadly friends posited here as the subject of a very good poem.. thank u. tony

This is interesting and thought provoking, unique powerful. Thanks.

An insightful piece of poetry, elegantly brought forth in good diction with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Luz.

Surely such people are there with us. But how nicely, you exposed the vices of a human nature in a sweet, cultured way. I love it.

Very well written, the pacing is brilliant! It reminded me to be weary of whom I call friend. Almost a cationary tale, a very beatifully crafted poem in any case!

Wonderful poem and it was concluded with the solid answer. Not every sweet, shinning and tasty items are meant no harm to us; it could be deadly as written in this poem. Excellent! ! !

Nicely written, you paint a picture with your words. It gave cause to think. The flow was nicely put.10