Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Monday, October 21, 2013

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I have gone crazy
As she showed her self very busy
I was expecting her to be easy
But she was all the more no lazy
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 October 2013

welcome Lucette Bailliet like this. a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 October 2013

Rosina Higgins likes this. Rosina Higgins She whispers with snake’s charm! ! ! 35 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 October 2013

Edited work needed Ken Jordan2 minutes ago The concept of poetry is there, however, some lines are not grammatically correct. Keep writing my friend. Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago i shall be obliged if some lines are corrected and sent to me 0 Needs work

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 October 2013

Jesse Radin15 minutes ago Maybe I am incorrect but I feel the grammar detracts from the poem overall Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago suggest what it could have been.. it is right fro mind chamber with word dictionery. i shall appreciate if u proof n send me back

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 October 2013

I have gone crazy As she showed her self very busy

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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