Saturday, December 1, 2012

Deadly Awakening Comments

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Frighting night woke from a dead sleep
Heavy chest pains, struggle to move
Wondering what is going on, I was fine earlier
No warnings, no pain before the sleep
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Michael Peterson
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 01 December 2012

Your poem scares me a bit, though I have known all these symptoms through third parties accounts, but the way you have expressed the reasons why you want to live may disturb anyone who reads this poem! Just relax, enjoy the nature and love yourself.

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