Deadlock Comments

This poem is well written and creative to!

beautiful i loved this one

I adore creativity. This is a very creative thing that I did not expect. It is a troublesome thing. But, it is a truthful thing. That, makes this important and I gave it my excellant recommendation. GW62

Really unfortunate, yet................

its an odd poem, , , its remarkable! ! ! ! ! really good, you are one of the best poem writer of this site....10 thanks, jhane

....well expressed indeed.....10

An excellent composition................

I read this poem, a free style; the curiosity is kept. the meaning is not clear t, i saw some grammer mistakes, so elimintary. Mother tells, not moter tell. third person singular in present tense deman's' after the verb. My father averred there is... My father averred there was

i thought it is just a fantasy poem about ghost or something of that kind, never thought of kashmir, great work....

Till the end there is suspense in your poem. I never thought Kashmir would be behind the closed room till the end. A good poem indeed!

Moving and emotional. It is always good when people write from their hearts and you are a leading exponent of this talent.

you built up the mystery with nice imagery. the tragedy of Kashmir- deadlock over a piece of land, price being paid by the innocent citizens, very moving.10+ Mamta

deadlock..to square one...and implied to Kashmir...nice creativity...

a very touchy poem. till the end it seemed like a mystery what was behind the door. well done. a 10 surely. i hope all the cries will be swapped with the happy grins soon.

I like this one a lot because throughout this poem your thinking whats going on and at the end everything makes sense. A 10

you bring out well a most relevant point here in this poem satya...10/10

Fantastic lines.Kashmir is a surprise.Congratulations.Thank you Sathya

known from the unknown...pain from the plains...great effort

such sudden twist at the end...!

methodically placed words from begining to end and a catchy finish. Oh Kashmir even I cry for you.. paradise there doors are closed 10 from me