Sunday, May 19, 2019

Deadbeat Comments

Rating: 4.6

To live again, I
will not come after dying for
you. Resurrection?
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Satish Verma
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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 November 2021

A brilliant poem! I liked your last stanza most! Top score!

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Khairul Ahsan 07 June 2020

Congratulations on your poem being chosen as the 'Member Poem Of The Day'! The last stanza of the poem is thought provoking.

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Kevin Patrick 07 June 2020

The only thing immortal is dust, and the memory lost in the wind. Thoughtful and meditative work, it lingers in the mind. Well chosen for poem of the day.

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Chinedu Dike 07 June 2020

A concise and insightful verse. A witty philosophical reflection.

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Bill Cantrell 07 June 2020

An outstanding poem rightfully selected as poem of the day, congratulations

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 June 2020

I ask the dust, when did you slip from the moon to kiss immortal? What a wonderful imagination my dear poet. tony

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To live again, I will not come after dying for you. Resurrection? Congratulations

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 07 June 2020

as usual, this poem takes us to greater height to Moon, as the dust slipped from it to kiss the immortal.. Thank you for sharing...Congratulations!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 07 June 2020

A philosophical introvert and intriguing poem with deep meaning. Congrats on selection as poem of the day second time.

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Mahtab Bangalee 07 June 2020

Deadbeat epitaph slipping from the moon to arrange anniversary...............congrats..........

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Ratnakar Mandlik 07 June 2019

A meaningful and thought provoking deadbeat. Congrats on poem of the Day.

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 07 June 2019

Don't leave a cut on the sandstone to mark the anniversary............What a profound message to the society! Great stuff. Congrats on your positioning X

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 June 2019

Great poem indeed. Touching....Congrats.

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Coltron 07 June 2019

I’m sorry dude I’m really am.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 June 2019

To live again! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Coltron 07 June 2019

I really didn’t mean it

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 June 2019

Don't leave a cut on the sandstone to mark the anniversary. in a very gentle way and in simple style you wrote a fine poem full of imagination. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 June 2019

Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulation for being chosen as the member poem of the poem of the day.

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Jane Campion 07 June 2019

Your last stanza is outstanding.

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Mahtab Bangalee 07 June 2019

death cannot touch the dust immortally!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 June 2019

Congratulations for being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. A thought provoking poem.

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Matthew Holloway 07 June 2019

A interesting read, congratulations on poem of the day

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