To live again, I
will not come after dying for
you. Resurrection?
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Congratulations on your poem being chosen as the 'Member Poem Of The Day'! The last stanza of the poem is thought provoking.
The only thing immortal is dust, and the memory lost in the wind. Thoughtful and meditative work, it lingers in the mind. Well chosen for poem of the day.
A concise and insightful verse. A witty philosophical reflection.
An outstanding poem rightfully selected as poem of the day, congratulations
I ask the dust, when did you slip from the moon to kiss immortal? What a wonderful imagination my dear poet. tony
To live again, I will not come after dying for you. Resurrection? Congratulations
as usual, this poem takes us to greater height to Moon, as the dust slipped from it to kiss the immortal.. Thank you for sharing...Congratulations!
A philosophical introvert and intriguing poem with deep meaning. Congrats on selection as poem of the day second time.
Deadbeat epitaph slipping from the moon to arrange anniversary...............congrats..........
A meaningful and thought provoking deadbeat. Congrats on poem of the Day.
Don't leave a cut on the sandstone to mark the anniversary............What a profound message to the society! Great stuff. Congrats on your positioning X
Don't leave a cut on the sandstone to mark the anniversary. in a very gentle way and in simple style you wrote a fine poem full of imagination. tony
Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulation for being chosen as the member poem of the poem of the day.
Congratulations for being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. A thought provoking poem.
A brilliant poem! I liked your last stanza most! Top score!