Deadbeat Comments

A brilliant poem! I liked your last stanza most! Top score!

Congratulations on your poem being chosen as the 'Member Poem Of The Day'! The last stanza of the poem is thought provoking.

The only thing immortal is dust, and the memory lost in the wind. Thoughtful and meditative work, it lingers in the mind. Well chosen for poem of the day.

A concise and insightful verse. A witty philosophical reflection.

An outstanding poem rightfully selected as poem of the day, congratulations

I ask the dust, when did you slip from the moon to kiss immortal? What a wonderful imagination my dear poet. tony

To live again, I will not come after dying for you. Resurrection? Congratulations

as usual, this poem takes us to greater height to Moon, as the dust slipped from it to kiss the immortal.. Thank you for sharing...Congratulations!

A philosophical introvert and intriguing poem with deep meaning. Congrats on selection as poem of the day second time.

Deadbeat epitaph slipping from the moon to arrange anniversary...............congrats..........

A meaningful and thought provoking deadbeat. Congrats on poem of the Day.

Don't leave a cut on the sandstone to mark the anniversary............What a profound message to the society! Great stuff. Congrats on your positioning X

Great poem indeed. Touching....Congrats.

To live again! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Don't leave a cut on the sandstone to mark the anniversary. in a very gentle way and in simple style you wrote a fine poem full of imagination. tony

Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulation for being chosen as the member poem of the poem of the day.

Your last stanza is outstanding.

death cannot touch the dust immortally!

Congratulations for being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. A thought provoking poem.

A interesting read, congratulations on poem of the day