Recently no word playing in me
I am imprisoned in glistening mirror
Enamored mind in barren grayness
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I am imprisoned in glistening mirror Enamored mind in barren grayness. What a glistering imagery!
Fantastic, the last resting place of everything....Fabulous 10***
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Great poem. A great way to say you lack inspiration for poety. It will come.
Words are never dead. Even now we cherish the theories of Newton and Einstein and Archemides as we drive our car, nuclear weapon fear and as we sail in the ocean vast....just the words should fall in right ground to be nurtured and cared and above all respected.
Your poem expresses the agony of a lonely heart. Beautifully penned.5***
There are times when we are at our vulnerable state. No matter how we pound our mind, words could never come out, making our thoughts go wayward. A well conveyed write with compelling imagery.