She hadn't been alive
She has not long realised
The darkness
The cupboard she was in
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Strength! ! Courageous! She is not afraid of dying. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
such is the beauty of the poem that it speaks of every lady next door, who spends her time cleaning the mess of others, who does not have time to hear the soft music she loves, to open the window and enjoy the green grass. Now the time has come to rest in the coffin, the eternal rest. A very lovely poem indeed.
The story of a sad, miserable, mundane life. Yet this lady wants to give joy to others. A beautiful thought, Lyn. I enjoy reading poems That have a strong message for humanity.
Oh! What a brilliant write it is. So nively speculated. I like most lines are .. She knows What she doesn't want She knows Her wants are simple She knows The pure beauty of living. Many thanks for posting.....10
Thank you so much for this outstanding write Lyn! The thankless job of looking after our loved ones is beautifully portrayed but this woman is the essence of love and the truth of wanting to give, she is fulfilled as she sees the beauty of living!