I try to steal a chunk of sleep
From the eyes of a dozing infant
And reinforce my fading dreams
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A good treatment of words to an awaiting lonely heart for love Seema...but why do you say 'a dead. tree'? ... does it suit a hopeful love...good poem anyway10
Longing and hope in the last two stanzas is very appealing. A lovely poem.10
lovely words! you are absolutely one of most talented poets from India! keep writing!
thnq, seema for drawing my attention to this particular poem of urs...to be a tree-dead or alive-and nothing more!
Sweet poetry. In fact very sweet. especillay the 5th stanza.
WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ONE OF THE BEST AND FINEST POEMS.will desist the temptation of analysising it word by word or line by line.such analysis will mar its beauty.
This is beautiful poetry, a dead tree waits for rebirth, while you are waiting filling time decorating your nest to make an enchanting scene. 10++