Monday, February 23, 2009

Dead Tree Comments

Rating: 4.9

I try to steal a chunk of sleep
From the eyes of a dozing infant
And reinforce my fading dreams
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Seema Aarella
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Bob Blackwell 07 May 2009

This is beautiful poetry, a dead tree waits for rebirth, while you are waiting filling time decorating your nest to make an enchanting scene. 10++

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Indira Renganathan 26 February 2009

A good treatment of words to an awaiting lonely heart for love Seema...but why do you say 'a dead. tree'? ... does it suit a hopeful love...good poem anyway10

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Sadiqullah Khan 26 February 2009

Longing and hope in the last two stanzas is very appealing. A lovely poem.10

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Chitra - 25 February 2009

Food for thought, wonderfully written

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 25 February 2009

lovely words! you are absolutely one of most talented poets from India! keep writing!

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Kesav Easwaran 25 February 2009

artful thoughts eloquently brought out...good poem...10

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Indira Babbellapati 25 February 2009

thnq, seema for drawing my attention to this particular poem of urs...to be a tree-dead or alive-and nothing more!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 25 February 2009

Sweet poetry. In fact very sweet. especillay the 5th stanza.

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R.k Das 24 February 2009

WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ONE OF THE BEST AND FINEST POEMS.will desist the temptation of analysising it word by word or line by line.such analysis will mar its beauty.

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Seema Aarella

Seema Aarella

KGF, India
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