Saturday, February 21, 2009

Dead Stars Comments

Rating: 5.0

I didn't know they were dead stars
Was I praying to the dark
Following the wrong charts
Leading further from the heart
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Sonya Florentino
COMMENTS
Patti Masterman 15 August 2009

Nobody could say you don't think like a poet. Any self respecting writer would be jealous of those first lines. After after recovering from the jealousy..in awe, of course!

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How magnificently introspective and honest. And oh how we try to find the right path. A marvelous write, I could feel myself in your words!

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Sandra Fowler 26 February 2009

Love your title. In my mind I can see those lightless stars. You are in good poetic voice in this one, Sonya.10, of course. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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