Wednesday, January 10, 2007

Dead Snow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Standing by the dim lamp post,
Heaven's Tears fall upon me.
Snowflakes and glitter dancing,
Flighted by the harsh wind.
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Sylvia Thomas
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Adam Holmes 30 April 2008

the emotion is strong, when i was reading this, it felt like it was happening to me

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Not a member No 4 10 January 2007

This is a very sad situation indeed Laura, and that barrier can be an impossible one to cross - speaking from experience. The poetry is as good as the situation is bad. The contrast of the beauty of love and snow with the tragedy of the situation works perfectly. Good writing. jim

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