Thursday, December 16, 2010

Dead Rose Comments

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My cold, dead fingers
Pried away from his face
Are still reaching
Reaching for something
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Kim Jones
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 17 December 2010

I just love this piece for its beautiful imagery and pathos. The whole poem presents the frustration of the lover very well. Kudos to your efforts.

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