Dead Relationship Comments

The poem is a sad reflection of everday reality................... Good Write

It is a sad fact that family ties don't seem to matter anymore, good write that pulls no punches, 10 Lynda xx

well said, great theme...strong family ties no longer exist in our society today due to the fast changing of life style from busy environment and the socio-economic factors that affects the family..10+++++++++

emotion narrated well...past is past..dead is dead..

beautiful poem full of facts. thanks for sharing dear friend. ++10

reallyu true sir, The offerings to one after death is vain what matters is how he is treated while alive Sandhya 10+++++

A very good write...but its performed in fear...would have been good if it is performed with love...very well expressed feelings

Rituals performed are believed to enable the freed soul to regain birth...more of a thanksgiving nature in the lighter sense...performing rituals out of fear is superstition...if performed in good faith and in love and respect towards the deceased it should please the mind; should give mental satisfaction and peace to the performing individuals...10

A perfect performance indeed. But deserving of no applause. A powerfully written piece. You felt this one very deeply.10, of course. Kind regards, Sandra