Saturday, October 18, 2014

Dead Rain Comments

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Black rain falls upon my page
from melancholy springs.
Dead rain drips from tired eyes
as life goes down the drain.
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william cantrell
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Daniel Brick 04 August 2018

Your melancholy brings forth such awareness of the human condition that we know it knows the truth of things But knowledge always brings with it a degree of sadness. Ignorance truly is bliss, but it is an unhealthy bliss cut off. the truth. and enslaves our minds. So the melancholy you feel is the weight you must carry a long, long time to give truth to others. It is your worthy life commitment.

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