Wednesday, February 25, 2009

Dead Poet's Mind Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fractured lines half realized
From where to lips to pen
Dead poets mind to spill a page
Flesh the colors from my skin
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Pablo Cruise
COMMENTS
Elizabeth Barry 26 February 2010

Hi a lovely read and the last two lines grabbed my heart! very enjoyable well done, magical to read and it read well! thanks elizabeth

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Wojja Fink 22 March 2009

You are the voices in my head... better than the living dead.............great read Pablo.....John

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Mark R Slaughter 18 March 2009

Stunning blend of metaphors Pablo - got me thinking! Mark

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Sathyanarayana M V S 18 March 2009

Lovely poem....so many similies and metaphors beautifully weaved.

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Eyan Desir 11 March 2009

very nice a pleasure to read

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premji premji 11 March 2009

poet dead or alive...superactive in your poem

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Ershad Mazumder 09 March 2009

Its really a super excellant poem.

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Meggie Gultiano 03 March 2009

this is nice and well written.thanks for this

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Lynda Robson 03 March 2009

Well written and shows the angst of a poet's mind, 10 Lynda xx

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Ency Bearis 03 March 2009

demised mind of the poet enliven by your write here..great poem...10

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rago rago 02 March 2009

Well penned yet needs refinement. Nice and beautifully crafted.

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Kesav Easwaran 02 March 2009

good piece Pablo...poems are poems...once born out, i believe, they are beyond edit...like God's own creations...genuine with their good and bad sides inbuilt...10

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 02 March 2009

A dead poet's mind is alive in this poem. A good poem in all aspects.

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Aldo Kraas 02 March 2009

That poem is a master piece

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Fiona Davidson 02 March 2009

Excellent write Pablo...excellent to read...thanks...10++

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~ Jon London ~ 26 February 2009

Words placed here are one of a natural, nice job

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