Monday, August 17, 2020

Dead Pen Walking Comments

Rating: 5.0

The pen who never catches sleep,
Will never know just how to weep
From poem to poem without a breath
The poet overlooks his death
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Bill Cantrell
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Aqua Flower 07 September 2020

The best lines are the first two that says it all! Good one Bill!

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M Asim Nehal 18 August 2020

Profound! ! ! Where imagination ends stupidity starts and the dead pen keeps walking without knowing what it is up to...Liked it Bill.10+++++

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Kostas Lagos 18 August 2020

Quantity is not quality.Good one Bill!

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Paul Brookes 18 August 2020

A clever write The words of today may just end up in the trash bin of history and the feet iambic or other wise will be like a beetle on its back no use to anyone. Great write enjoyed its philosophy

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Susan Williams 17 August 2020

Bill, bless your heart, you know I could not resist a poem with this catchy a title! ! ! ! ! [And wasn't it Sean Penn who starred in the movie Dead Man Walking? ] I totally agree with your comment- The pen who never catches sleep, Will never know just how to weep- - You get a 10++++++++

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