Sunday, January 23, 2011

Dead Inside Alone Is I Comments

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Nine twenty four zero nine, for me it all started to fade

Months had past with no positive change, only continuous misery's made
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Kim Patterson
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Rick Adriolo 23 January 2012

this poem is strong and it really makes me feel your sadness.. it reads like a story.. once finnished you want to read part 2.. I hope you will soon write something new.. I can't wait.. and if you need inspiration.. read some of my poems.. it's in the same writing style like your poems and I believe my poems are something you can relate to..

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