Saturday, November 7, 2009

Dead In Depression Comments

Rating: 4.8

Like an ash from a flame
fallen to the ground…
I am cold, gray and dead.
Like an ember
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George Grogan
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Amy Marie 02 December 2010

Good job! You wrote about one of the most fascinating things in the world - depression :)

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Allan O 07 November 2009

short but very good...thanks ~^..^

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Fay Slimm 07 November 2009

Strong and vivid metaphors bring stark reality into this short verse - -a well written cry against capitulation to depression....10. Fay

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