Thursday, May 2, 2013

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Burn the flowers
Rip the curtains
Don’t fake it
Unless you’re certain
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Suicidal Happiness
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Lyn Paul 05 May 2013

This is written so well yet it is pure sadness to feel this way. Keep on keeping on and sharing your work.

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Ace Of Black Hearts 02 May 2013

Indeed that is a very dark poem, forgive me asking I'm not trying to insult you in the slightest. You seem to be really good with words you every try injecting good emotions in your poems. Now don't get me wrong I like these dark poems, but you got talent and a variety of poems is a fruit waiting to be plucked. Thanks for sharing the poems.

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Suicidal Happiness

Suicidal Happiness

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