Tuesday, October 15, 2013

Dead Fox... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your ocre tones capture my vision
Beneath the hedgerow
Beside the business grey road
Which snarls past your
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Kanav Justa 05 November 2013

... superb choice of words.... and the way you described was great...

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Even death is teeming with life as maggots. And so will it be with us too when we some day go down under as food for worms. Good poem and welcome to my page

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Danny Draper 15 October 2013

Evocative indeed, a beautiful lyrical and fantastically descriptive write with a superb deft finish in the last short stanza. You should submit this for publication at your writers and poets group.

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Douglas Scotney 15 October 2013

Evocative. I heard a fox cry in a movie...it had been distracted from eating dead bodies. Then, next day, read that the cry can be mistaken for a human crying in distress. And I thought of all those dead foxes I saw, run over on the road just out of Nyngan, NSW, Australia, on the road to Broken Hill.

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