Friday, April 2, 2010

Dead Ends Comments

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So many times I've tried to run,
Just ending back where I begun.
I thought that I could've run forever,
Thought that I'd be some place better.
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Chris Newlash
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 02 April 2010

Excellent poem and great presentation, the emotions you brought out are cutting and impact the reader in this lines. 10++++++

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