Saturday, July 25, 2009

Dead End Road Comments

Rating: 5.0

I can’t cope anymore, it’s such a mess
I do what I can, I try my best
But for every step forward I take two back
I just can’t do it, I am fed up, I am jack
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Jasmin Bell 28 July 2009

great pem(like always) i like how all of your poems have a certain theme

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Martin Swords 25 July 2009

Timothy........ Firstly cheer up and keep writing because you're good and could be better. Secondly you've heard the idea of 'unto thyself be true'.Stop worrying about other people and what they think of you and concentrate on what you think of you. Be yourself and people will take you or leave you, OK? Keep writing your poetry only pay attention to the detail.....are you to young..(too?) ....I to old...(too?) ..........No I have a connection....(now?) If you don't care about your poems.....why should I? Keep going.....and say hello Martin

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Sarwar Chowdhury 25 July 2009

yea sometime its difficult to cope with! finely penned thoughts! 10+

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