Monday, August 31, 2009

Dead Drummers Beat. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I can hear the pounding of the dead drummers beat
Telling me the secrets that only they can keep
From within their never-ending, dark, dreamless sleep
Lost forever in the waters, so vast and deep.
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J.A McManus
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sky dreams 14 November 2009

this is such an interesting poem.. captivating and creatively written with the subject showing the clear intelligence of the writer.. i fully enjoyed reading this

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Anne Unknown 11 October 2009

Yes, I do. It has a intellectual flow to the words. And it kept me interested the whole way through. You should be very proud of this poem. And I will look for your new poems you said you would write. Until the next poem.

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Ian Curtis 16 September 2009

Mate I listen to a lot of dead drummers, I'd say each one would be proud of this

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The answer is 'Yes Yes' I can hear the pounding of the dead drummers beat. A great big idea with a unique title! Lots of scary images too! I think I will leave the light on tonight when I go to bed! Top marks Karin

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Aparna Sinha 16 September 2009

One Word- LOVELY! what is your inspiration for this poem..it is so beautifully crafted! please ask other members to read it too! I am sure they will love it.

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J.A McManus

J.A McManus

Carlisle, Cumbria
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