Thursday, May 24, 2018

Dead Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

I stand frozen in time
my eyes watch as life continues
I hear nothing but muffled sounds
I am a prisoner in my own mind
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Aqua Flower
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C F 25 October 2019

So much sadness expressed in these few lines.... one of the best I have read from your pen! 10+

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Carl Roussell 24 May 2018

These lines illustrate how hard it must be to live with depression my thoughts are not still they seem to be running a marathon and I wonder how I will go on knowing that my dreams are dead and gone

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Aqua Flower 02 June 2018

Depression can own you. I feel there are many different levels of it. Some people can get out of it, some people get trapped and hard to snap out of it. Life can get to you sometimes. I've learned that dreams and hope give way to brighter paths! Thanks for acknowledging this poem.

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