Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, August 23, 2014

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"Can you not forgive?
I asked him sincerely to give
You are elder to me
And like a giant tree
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 August 2014

great Aleph Null19 minutes ago well written seems to be about boyhood and becoming a father. Thank you Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 August 2014

Truth Nicholas Ellis19 minutes ago When the truth comes it may hurt Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 August 2014

Great Lesson Laura Forbes19 minutes ago We must all try to seek forgiveness. It is a beautiful poem. Keep writing about life lessons. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 August 2014

Mercy Charlie Thomas19 minutes ago Contemplation of emotional response.......

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 August 2014

“Can you not forgive? I asked him sincerely to give

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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