Dead Clock Comments

Great shurbhi liked your work... Will be waiting for more.... And don't dishearten even dead clock shows right time once in a day... Be positive.....

And the time between you and me Kept on increasing From seconds to hours Months to years Till it lost its sync.... the pathetic sense of a heartbreak and loneliness is pictured well in the allegory of the clock that stopped.... very great imagination dear poet. tony just sent u a comment nd gave u a big 10. would u read my poem “if you die before me” thank you. tony God bless you.

And the time between you and me Kept on increasing From seconds to hours Months to years Till it lost its sync.... the pathetic sense of a heartbreak and loneliness is pictured well in the allegory of the clock that stopped.... very great imagination dear poet. tony