Monday, June 2, 2008

Dead Churches, Dead Bodies, Dead Animals Comments

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Morticians paint
the lips of corpses.

Enbalmers inject
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O Anna Niemus
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Sage of Time 11 August 2008

oooooo thats awesome! ! !

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Callie Carroll 02 June 2008

The ideas intrigue me. I would rework stanzas 2 and 4. Same ideas (good ones) , different word choice? ? I hope you don't take offense. These are just the kind of comments I would welcome to help me improve my poems.

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