Monday, August 31, 2009

Dead Cattle And Rain Comments

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She cried all night in the field
Surrounded by hills and pouring rain
The cry vibrating, echoing around the hills
Sounding like a ship lost in fog
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Sue Ann Simar 09 July 2013

The last lines are their own poem: . The squabbling of birds for their turn upon the carcass in a valley of fleece white stillness.

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Brian Taylor 07 September 2009

NATURE RED IN TOOTH AND CLAW Young Farmer Giles is all smiles as he shows you round his fields with knowledgeable statistics about investment, costs and yields and the transcendental beauty of his meadows streams and fields. His compassion for the pain of his dead calf in the rain is evidence of the real loss that he feels. But finer feelings have to wait when, coming in for his meals, he settles comfortably in his seat, for he sees the dead calf at his feet but not the dead cow on his plate. Brian

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Original Unknown Girl 03 September 2009

Wow.... this is superb. Imagery is gorgeous, though the topic is sad it held my interest right to the end. We cannot imagine cows crying but they have such doleful beautiful eyes that if they did it would indeed be a sight to behold. HG: -) xx

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