Dead By Morning Comments

Fabulous, Fantastic, A+ :)

My God, this is so straight forward! I loved the terse statement, 'I knew you’d be dead by morning.' 'stole the words from your lips so as not to hear you speak one last word that would imprison me.' These lines convey your mind so clearly! Loved the poem.

taking control is a hard thing to do but, when you are pushed to the braking point you must do what must be done. you have done just that. nicely done

You are a straight-forward person in your life, it looks! this is my 3rd poem from this page, and i can say, you know your job well! ! !

fantastic. sometimes love changes to hatred and the best thing not to foster hatred is bury the memories. superb my friend~nb

This is Amazing! I LOve This! Great Ink! ; -)